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PR logo by mircha69 PR logo by mircha69
racing team logo and business cards

let me know what you think, enjoy!



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I think you've got the makings of a logo that could be fantastic, but it just needs a bit more work done to take it there.

The concept of the cheetah head is a great symbol to represent racing. Everybody knows that cheetahs are really quick animals, and to pair that with a tire-like shape is great. The logo mostly suffers when it comes to the details, though. I think you could probably remove some of the cheetah illustrative elements and still have a cheetah-like shape. Namely, get rid of those whispy, thin lines and stick with bolder shapes, wherever possible. Also, having the cheetah head "cut out" of a circular shape is starting to work, but you need to do the cut out to a broader extreme to keep odd shapes from appearing (like the shape created underneath the cheetah's chin...that's an awkward shape).

The "pardus" font is also kind of suffering, as it feels very old and done-before. I've seen it many times and while it does serve the purpose of feeling like a racing font, I think there are others out there that could do the job better. The placement of the word "RACING" also feels kind of misbalanced when juxtaposed against the cheetah head mark.

The 2-color scheme is nice, though. Using the yellow-orange sparingly is also kinda cool.
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B-positive Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
hey check this out> [link]
probably riped off
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mircha69 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
thanks man, i contacted them and i hope they will take my work down, the thing is almost everything in their portfolio is ripped of....

i appreciate your interest
Mircea
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B-positive Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
I know that, that's why I informed you, they had some of my work too...
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ubd17 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010
WoW ,,
Very Nice Work ,,
Ilike it ,,
Good Color and Very attractive shape ..
Best Regard ..
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Raizercry Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010
wow that's a hot one!
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mircha69 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
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mehtab123 Featured By Owner May 24, 2010
Awesome
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mircha69 Featured By Owner May 24, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
thanks!
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Swiftau Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
Very nice mate, it's a concept that you can get from a glance. It's detailed yet simplistic, I love it! :+fav: :)

By the way, what do you use to create fonts?
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mircha69 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
i used a trial version of fontcreator for pointone but that was about it...mainly i keep them as vector

thanks!
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